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Well that took about 5 times longer than I had intended to spend on this. ^^; Why does that sound familiar? 

So this is yet another AU for Dear Beans, in this particular case, the ...Single Parent!AU!!! xD This be Seth’s kid (Everest) + Chris’s super white and fluffy husky lab mix puppy (Sunny). Everest should be in preschool for the AU; he looks a bit old here.
In canon-verse, Sunny is married!Seth & Chris’s dog, so she’d be “Sunny Go”... but now Chris isn’t married and so the dog’s name is “Sunny Sun”? lmao that sounds kinda weird. :lmao:

Too many AUs? Have a list.



~ Dear Beans | [Untitled S.P. AU] ~
A slice-of-life story focusing on four friends and their relationships as they grow up.
A single parent!AU in which smol children (and puppies) are adorable.

{ABOUT CHARACTER GUIDE | CHAPTER LIST | GALLERY | TIMELINE}
PROFILE | GALLERY | REBLOG ON TUMBLR

Characters: Everest Go, Sunny ...Sun... xD Setting: SP AU
PS | Wed-Thurs, Jan 4-5, 2017 (5 hrs) // Dear Beans (c) Sorcaron



I was going to fix Sunny’s front feet but then I forgot... oh well. >.> This was supposed to be quick drawing. ^^;
  • Problem Areas: 
    • Everest’s face: Originally done in attempted child anime-ish style; already hard to get there, but then that looked extra awkward when the hands looked too realistic; eventually went for semi-realism (it’s been a long while haha)
    • I super cannot draw animals, but okay cool good enough. 
    • The puppy’s legs are kinda splayed out, but that looked weird so I tried the regular sit. That looked weird too, so back to this. 

  • Drawn mostly with the hexagon brush and a tiny bit of 63 watercolor(?) brush (a.k.a my usual) and a cloud brush or two. 
    • Colors/values were kinda weird on Everest, so I switched to painting in grayscale(ish) (it would've been useful to just have mask type layer? DxD)
    • Not quite sure how to go from grayscale to color though, so some of the colors are kinda wonky...
    • Used blend mode "Color" and some "Soft Light" semi-haphazardly to give Everest and the background (er, above ground?) some color. 

  • Refs used: this + some old photos of my brothers
  • Here’s a gif of my WIPs.
  • Here’s a video of most of my drawing process at 32x speed
  • Here’s a mostly desaturated version. :D :D
I swear I didn't mean to write this much in the description. ^^; Anywho, I need to work on my drawing/painting speed. >.>
And also TLC Ship Weeks. I should be working on TLC Ship Weeks.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

My first impression about this painting is it’s a heart-felt, lovely work. The connection between the boy on the dog is well depicted here, with all gestures and the bright colors. I’m not specialized in dog painting but I think you’ve got the proportion and the pose right, and also that of the boy.

But I think there’s one apparent bit of a flaw, which is the slightly unbalanced composition as the ‘head bonk’ between the two character is not positioned in the center, making the dog taking the space more. I think with this kind of painting with equal level of interaction in it (and with this ground level too) it would be better if the central view point is used. And if you’re still looking for something to improve I’d say you may want to define the boy’s clothes’ folding more by using smaller brushes and smoother strokes. I think though this could be enough as it is but still too rough.

Overall this is a very nice painting already, doing well in depicting the loving interation between the boy and his pet only personally I think if you also give the boy more space (at the right) the whole story would be more complete. Keep up the good work.


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